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Fic: Bee Mine
ST - k/s love
lallyloo wrote in simple_feeling
Title: Bee Mine
Series: ST XI
Rating: R
Word Count: 6725
Disclaimer: They're not mine, unfortunately.
Notes: Written for ksvalentine.

Summary: For the prompt: Spock has never understood Valentine's Day and never been a participant (receiving cards from besotted students doesn't count). As a rational exercise, Jim offers to show him how it works and in the process secretly woos Spock. By the end of the day, with all the little things Kirk has said and done, Spock is *very* receptive...

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Sooooo adorable!

This made my day.

*Huge Grin*

Thanks! I'm happy I could make your day. :D

*flail*

I can't believe you wrote this at the last minute! It doesn't feel rushed or anything less than brilliant *DIES OF ENVY*

But this was hilarious, adorable, too sweet for words and just so much fun. I love Spock's bewildered acceptance of Jim's antics and the way Jim got the entire bridge crew involved and every single bit of banter between them was so spot on and in voice and just wonderful~!

<3 <3 <3

(I admit I was waiting for Jim to ask Spock to choo-choo-choose him XD)

Haha I was still writing it just before midnight, but managed to get it in under the wire.. So I'm happy to hear it doesn't feel rushed! :D

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it, and heeee Jim asking Spock to choo-choo-choose him would've been amusing and adorable. Oh Jim. <3

This is bee-yond awesome!

Jim was just adorably sneaky planning the perfect day for his Valentine. And Spock... awwwww! I adore your Spock sooooooooo much. It was so sweet watching him won over by Jim.

I loved it all. The 'pleasing' bee, the hillarious PAD conversation, the dinner date and *fans self* the hotness of the ending.

Yummy :)

:D I'm happy you liked this and that you enjoyed my love-struck Spock. Thank you! <3

Eeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! ADORABLE. Spock was so cute, staring at Jim all day and expecting more notes. He's such a closet romantic. :D

Thanks bb! I'm glad you liked it! You know Spock is a total closet romantic. ;)

Thank you! (and Spock, that's a lovely hat!)

The bit about Spock elongating his torso was just yum!

The dialogue was so good! And the plot was so cute and mushy, like a cuddly teddy!

LOL a cuddly teddy. Thanks bb! <3

I'm not even a big Valentine's Day person, but I loved this! It was ridiculously adorable. I especially liked how much Spock liked the "illogically pleasing bee."

Haha I'm glad you enjoyed it then! Thanks so much. :)

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Awww I'm happy you liked it, and that it's one you'll want to read over again! Thanks bb! <3

Oh. My gosh! This is incredible! Incredibly pleasing!! :D That whole bee conversation was totally hilarious and SO them! I especially love how it wasn't too much--it wasn't sappy, and they still obviously have their working relationship--and yet, it was still FUN! :D Thanks for writing!!

Haha I find your comment incredibly pleasing too :D Thank you!!

I love this! It's so cute and realistic!
Also just cause I couldn't resist:
"-he'd realized halfway through that he seemed unable to look away from Jim's piercing blue eyes, and then berated himself at his use of the word piercing to describe a body party"-I can think of a body part the word 'piercing' applies to *wink wink*

Sorry for the late reply! I'm glad you enjoyed this, and LOL piercing.. ;)

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This was adorable and made me stupidly happy, especially the note at the end. :)