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Fic: Bee Mine
ST - k/s love
lallyloo wrote in simple_feeling
Title: Bee Mine
Series: ST XI
Rating: R
Word Count: 6725
Disclaimer: They're not mine, unfortunately.
Notes: Written for ksvalentine.

Summary: For the prompt: Spock has never understood Valentine's Day and never been a participant (receiving cards from besotted students doesn't count). As a rational exercise, Jim offers to show him how it works and in the process secretly woos Spock. By the end of the day, with all the little things Kirk has said and done, Spock is *very* receptive...

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Like everyone else, I had a silly grin on my face from start to finish - and now my face is aching!

This was sooo sweet. I loved how Spock's feelings for Jim evolved over the day as he began to consider Jim in a romantic way - how when Jim didn't do something, Spock started to feel disappointed.

And then they finally got together and the sex was loving and hot and a fabulous round-off to a really great story. :D

Thank you! ♥

I'm so happy you liked this! And I'm glad the sex worked too.. I was a bit iffy about throwing them right into it, but I remembered the request for more smut for the Valentine calendar, and I'm always up for some K/S smut, so... :)

As always, thanks so much! ♥

I'm glad! Thank you! :)

This is so cute!! I loved how much thought Jim put into the Valentine's Day "experiment" and how Spock started to expect the extra attention and the gifts as his feelings for Jim evolved. This story filled me with so much glee!!

brb rereading and drawing hearts around it :D

<333

Yay gleeeee! :D I'm happy you liked this one, bb! Thanks so much! <333

Oh god, this was just so sweet! And while being fluffy, still managed to be in character. I have the biggest grin on my face now from reading this :D

<3

Glad I could make you smile! Thanks so much. <3

This is so cute. And I really loved the way it was structured. Jim really is the best. I loved the poem (and Spock's reaction to it) and the illogically pleasing bee. Like I said, this is so, so cute. Fantastic job.

Awww, yes, Jim.. he is the best. <3 I'm glad you liked this! Thank you. :)

Edited at 2011-02-11 05:23 am (UTC)

I loved the way Spock began anticipating Jim's next move. And a very happy ending.

Glad you liked it! Thanks. :)

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Haha sorry, bb. ;) So happy you liked it though! Thank you!

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Thanks! And haha, yeah, Jim's valentines make Spock all illogical.. ;)

so sweet and so hot!!
how you do that!!!

i love it !!!

you know in here valentine day is nothing like that, no notes or decorations

is a day to celebrate the love you have so only pairs involved romantically celebrate the day some people marry this day

but i see that in there even kids celebrate? where here no

but we could have the breakfast and the date and definitively the flowers, maybe some chocolates. Things are so different from country to country no?

i never was sad because i have no date because the majority doesn't have one either in school this day and at least you want to propose marriage, well no one will propose a relationship this day





Edited at 2011-02-11 12:11 am (UTC)

LOL I try! I'm glad you liked this one! And, yup, it sounds like Valentine's Day is a bit different where you are.. Here it's celebrated by anyone who wants to celebrate it. It's interesting that it can be so different depending on where you live.. :)

Aww, there is so much adorable in this. I loved how Jim seemed to be doing all the right things and moving at the right pace for Spock (right up until the very end of their dinner date), and how Spock found himself falling more and more for Jim and enjoying being wooed. So sweet!

And I found it amusing that Jim basically told everyone what he was doing. XD

Thank you for a lovely story!

I'm glad you liked it! And haha, yes, Jim.. he's really not embarrassed by much. ;)

Thank you for reading and commenting!

awww, this was adorable. of course jim drew a bee! and valentine's tie sex, yay!

Haha yay for Valentine's tie sex, indeed! Glad you liked this! Thanks icon twin. :)

Clean up on isle 5...puddle caused by hotness.

“I am disappointed that it ended, I am frustrated that I am left wanting more, and I am disappointed that I appear to have missed my chance.”

Best.Line.Ever.

Hahaha I aim to please! So glad you liked this! Thank you. :)

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Thanks! And I'm glad you liked the bit with the tie. ;)

Jim is officially a sweetheart! Thanks for writing a feel-good fluffy valentine fic :)

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks. :)