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Fic: Pirates, Spies, and Bedtime Stories 8/8 - Complete
ST - bb!spock two worlds
lallyloo wrote in simple_feeling
Title: Pirates, Spies, and Bedtime Stories 8/8
Series: ST XI
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3930 (total:~20,000)
Disclaimer: They're not mine, unfortunately.
Notes: For two prompts (here and here).
We've reached the end! To anyone following this, I'm sorry this took so long to complete. I'm going to miss writing the boys as five year olds.. so much so that I might visit this universe from time to time.. I'd love to write out the chess scene and a few other situations I've got running through my head. Until then, this part wraps up their adventure and gives them a happy little ending as adults. ♥
Part I | Part II | Part III | Part IV | Part V | Part VI | Part VII

Summary: Kirk & Spock arrive in the transporter room de-aged to five years old. While crew members search for a solution, Kirk & Spock play together on the Enterprise. Fluffy de-aged fic.

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O_o *twitch*

....I think I might explode from the cuteness....

...thanks for posting....*twitch*

Haha glad you liked it! Thanks :)


This story was really sweet and cute and I'm sad to see it end. You did a good job keeping everyone in character and this was an outstanding story.

I'm glad you thought so, and I have to admit I'm sad that I have to stop writing it now.. Thanks so much!

Aha-hah! So, he did remember. He just didn't want to say he did just in case Spock decided to ignore it.

*grins at the end*

Of course he remembered. :) He was just being scared/insecure Jim.. Glad it made you smile. Thanks!

(I have started reading this so many times today, but work kept getting in the way D: I am now ignoring work because dammit I wanted to read this!!)

This was the perfect ending to one of my favorite kid!fics! The final scene between Kirk and Spock was wonderful; so gentle, sweet and hesitant.

I am going to miss this story (and I'll definitely reread it!)

I'm glad you liked the final scene! I was a bit worried people might find it boring, but I really just wanted the two of them standing and talking (and being nervous and insecure and revealing feelings). Thanks so much bb! <333

d'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw~~~~~~~ i loved this entire fic so hard and that was the most wonderful ending it could have had~ :D

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much! :D

this is sooo beautifully written! I loved every bit of it!

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This was precious! I enjoyed it so much. Honestly, this is one of the best kid!fics I've read. Little Spock and Jimmy weren't overly annoying or too OOC. They were perfect, and all the other adults were perfect too. Thanks for writing such a fun fic!

Aww, I'm glad you thought so! Thanks so much!

awwww :3 I'm kinda sad they had to grow up because they were just the cutest but hey now they get to be adorable grown ups instead :D

Yeah.. I'm sort of sad to let them go.. Thanks bb. :D

I've never read kidfic before and certainly never thought I'd enjoy it this much.

Thank you.

Edited at 2010-09-28 08:20 am (UTC)

Aww, I'm glad you gave it a chance! Thanks! :)

This story was great!! Loved every moment of it! :o)

Oh, this was incredible!
So sweet and cute, and a tad angsty and I loved it!!!
I was all giddy and clutching my pillow and making embarassing noises while reading it, I loved every chapter!
Thank you so much for sharing this!!!
PS: And I LOVED Maggie! Best plant ever!
PPS: Can I rec this at my journal? Because I'd really, really like to! XD

Aww, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it this much. And of course you can rec it! I'd be honoured. :D

I loved it so much! I wish it was longer! I have such a weakness for de-aged and kid fics. :)

Awww, sorry it had to end! I might do little snapshots eventually though, so it might not be the last of this verse. :) Thanks so much!

(and HAHA so much icon love)

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! This was so adorable and fulfilling!! :D
I loved it, loved it!!

I'm glad you thought so bb! And I loved your running commentary as you were reading this. I was smiling like an idiot as I went through them (especially your rage-filled one.. so funny). Thanks so much! ♥♥♥