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Fic: Pirates, Spies, and Bedtime Stories 8/8 - Complete
ST - bb!spock two worlds
lallyloo wrote in simple_feeling
Title: Pirates, Spies, and Bedtime Stories 8/8
Series: ST XI
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3930 (total:~20,000)
Disclaimer: They're not mine, unfortunately.
Notes: For two prompts (here and here).
We've reached the end! To anyone following this, I'm sorry this took so long to complete. I'm going to miss writing the boys as five year olds.. so much so that I might visit this universe from time to time.. I'd love to write out the chess scene and a few other situations I've got running through my head. Until then, this part wraps up their adventure and gives them a happy little ending as adults. ♥
Part I | Part II | Part III | Part IV | Part V | Part VI | Part VII

Summary: Kirk & Spock arrive in the transporter room de-aged to five years old. While crew members search for a solution, Kirk & Spock play together on the Enterprise. Fluffy de-aged fic.

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I've never read kidfic before and certainly never thought I'd enjoy it this much.

Thank you.

Edited at 2010-09-28 08:20 am (UTC)

Aww, I'm glad you gave it a chance! Thanks! :)

This story was great!! Loved every moment of it! :o)

Oh, this was incredible!
So sweet and cute, and a tad angsty and I loved it!!!
I was all giddy and clutching my pillow and making embarassing noises while reading it, I loved every chapter!
Thank you so much for sharing this!!!
PS: And I LOVED Maggie! Best plant ever!
PPS: Can I rec this at my journal? Because I'd really, really like to! XD

Aww, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it this much. And of course you can rec it! I'd be honoured. :D

I loved it so much! I wish it was longer! I have such a weakness for de-aged and kid fics. :)

Awww, sorry it had to end! I might do little snapshots eventually though, so it might not be the last of this verse. :) Thanks so much!

(and HAHA so much icon love)

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! This was so adorable and fulfilling!! :D
I loved it, loved it!!
*claps*

I'm glad you thought so bb! And I loved your running commentary as you were reading this. I was smiling like an idiot as I went through them (especially your rage-filled one.. so funny). Thanks so much! ♥♥♥

This was beyond adorable and I absolutley loved everyone involved. Great job!

I'm happy you liked it! Thanks so much. :)

This story is unspeakably cute. That sound? is the sound of my ovaries exploding. Kid POVs are hard to do and this was remarkably well done.

Wow, I'm glad you thought so! Thanks so much. :)

WHEEEE!! I was saving this, and just read the whole thing, and it was GLORIOUS. Jim being afraid of the dark and Spock holding his hand just about killed me. And OMG, bb Spock and Jim sitting in the captain's chair and taking a nap on the bridge!! Everyone is perfect in this. And I have to say, I wouldn't mind making some babies with McCoy myself....

Wow.. I'm crazy late replying to this, bb. Sorry! I'm so happy you saved this to come back and read, and YAY YOU LIKED IT. :D Thanks so much!

Ahhhh! That was so great, such a sweet landing after such rollicking good fun. :D I loved it - thanks so much for writing! I especially loved the scene where Spock says "Please do not be sad"--it's so funny and so heart-tugging at the same time. Fantastic story. ♥

Sorry for the super late reply.. So glad you liked this. Thank you! ♥

Ahhhhh, they're the cutest thing I've ever read! Thank you

So. gosh. darn. cute. I was giggling madly while the boys were playing mummies and pirates, and loved their nap in front of the view screen. Bones was just perfect in his care for them, even down to his unease in how to answer Jim's question about his and Spock's friendship as adults. And I enjoyed the ending, in that it wasn't immediately perfect and it seemed very "Kirk-like" to try and weasel out of having to deal with his emotions (but thanks for the HEA!).

PS - please tell me that Jim made good on his promise to go back and visit Maggie regularly as an adult! She was one of my favorite things about the story. :)

THAT WAS SO ADORABLE

Oh my god! My face hurts from smiling.

this is fucking adorable omg
cutest thing ever, I love it
^-^ so glad that they got together in the end
I hope they go and see Maggie every day like the promised. I'm sure they do <3

Awww, I'm so book marking this! This amazing!

This was absolutely delightful thank you for a wonderful diversion.

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