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Fic: Pirates, Spies, and Bedtime Stories 2/8
ST - bb!spock two worlds
lallyloo wrote in simple_feeling
Title: Pirates, Spies, and Bedtime Stories 2/8
Series: ST XI
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2370
Disclaimer: They're not mine, unfortunately.
Notes: For two prompts (here and here).
Part I

Summary: Kirk & Spock arrive in the transporter room de-aged to five years old. While crew members search for a solution, Kirk & Spock play together on the Enterprise. Fluffy de-aged fic.

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Actually, Jim! You are cute! :D

*giggle at the end*


More plz! :D

Thanks! And there's definitely more to come. :D

I love your characterization of de-aged Jim and Spock in this! You can clearly see shades of their grown-up personalities, yet they both feel very much like the little kids they have become.

These lines more than any others made me go AWWW:
“It's alright, Spock!” Jim announces, taking Spock's hand. “I'll be right here if you get worried.”
Spock looks into the boy's bright blue eyes. Jim is smiling at him, and Spock can't deny a feeling of comfort as if somehow things will be alright as long as he and Jim stick together.

They are so cute!!

Awww I'm glad the characterization is working for you! Thank you so much bb!

Ah gawd. I can't. I can't handle this amount of cute. It's so so so good, MOAR PLEASE? :D

Holding hands and Spock being shy just about killed me. And then when I survived to the point of Spock being pet my lovely sentient plants, I actually died and now I'm typing this comment from the grave.


Thank you bb! There's definitely more to come! :D

And LOL please don't die! <33

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Awwww!! So cute!!
I love the interactions with Chekov and Sulu. Also when Jim was saying how tough he was was adorable!

Aww bb, I love all the comments you left on this! I'm about to respond to them, so I'll just apologize in advance for a bunch of "thanks so much" spam. Sorry... But thanks! ♥